How deep is shallow? *
I sit at the wall near the calm river
Contemplate, something makes me quiver
I look well in the skies and see them go by
They settle in the deep water and how lucid they fly
But I look again and see they are not so deep after all
They swim in the shallows as their depth is so small
Dom *Colucci 2010
beautiful play of words,
ReplyDeleteI am in with you.
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ReplyDeleteThree awards for poetry,
the most honest poet award,
the most open minded poet award,
the most intelligent poet award,
two general awards,
the big heart award,
you are the princess snow-white award.
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Happy Weekend!
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Dearest Jingle I can ever thank you enough..well here goes Thanks...enjoy as well and also thanks for liking my poem and Happy Saturday as well(+)
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Dearest soulbro,
ReplyDeletevery interesting way of looking at things- for the sake of argument we can say the thing about sky. but is it really so?
with lots of love.
Flat is the sky reflected in the river, flat is the river, seen from the sky. All depends on perception: the shalowness, the depth and the wall.
ReplyDeleteThe space is said to be 3D, one D is added by the non-existing time, but the rest of the D-s are conditioned bz the depth of our heart.
I vote for the infinite D-s, where the wall of ignornce walks away from us, and we see what IS.
Infinite and multi-dimensional.
Golden Lotus of God's Love...a simple reflection is always shallow....no depths can it ever fathom..enjoy as well(+)
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My Dearest Shiamala...you stand absolutely correct that in One dimensional, no dimensional or many dimensional...they are all connected infinitely...but beware they still are illusions..enjoy as well(+)
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