The knight without a light*
The castle was large and dismal gray
The princess was taken here to stay
The dragon guarded with its firey mouth
Awaited for the dilligent one to have its bout
The knight as saviour came to slew the beast
All he did was walk by him without scorn to say the least
Dom*Colucci 2010
The castle of ignorance was dismal gray
ReplyDeletePrincess named SOUL was taken away
To be held in that kingdom of total dismay
With vigor and hope for the saviour to come
She continued to live with the dragon in mind,
To be killed by a knight on a horse coloured white
In due time the knight manifest in that world
The knight is the Knowledge, the sword is True Word,
With Word does he slaughtered the ignorant beast
And Soul is released with a burning love kiss.
My Dearest Shiamala...I love your format as in poetic gest...you really are a talented intelligent woman...thanks always and enjoy as well(+)
ReplyDeleteDom*:)xo
dearest soulbro,
ReplyDeletelovely poem and counterpoem. :)
how imagination triggers imagination.
with lots of love.
Golden Lotus of God's Love...thanks as I was thinking a fairy tale last night as I never did one of these before last night...I am so glad you liked the poem and the counter poem as well...enjoy always(+)
ReplyDeletesoulbro*:)xo