Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Brighten up the deadlines*

Brightened up the deadlines*

On the flat is ground zero stands
Level but deadly true in its own land
Arisen from the spot on straight lines scene
The huge indifference of sunshine dreams
To see this grow as it blooms in the sky
We can only be more happier as it does fly by

Dom*Colucci 2010

2 comments:

  1. I liked the poem... especially the indifference.
    Espacially, that we hardly view the nature that way, although in fact it is indifferent. LOL

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  2. Thanks I liked the way I looked at the sun blooming in the sky..I think that is neat...enjoy Love(+)
    Dom*:)xo---{--@

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