Journey moves forward always*
Big oaks and pines that mask the light
You move one step at a time in your sight
To see ferns and ivy dot the trail side
Moving with stick in hand not losing my stride
The mountain has a flow with a stream
Babbling downward into the river it seems
Dom*Colucci 2010
I liked the meter.
ReplyDeleteThe stick?...if that is the case I was wondering why everyone had one so I broke a branch and used that...enjoy as well(+)
ReplyDeleteDom*xo--{--@
just beautiful. i could see you walking beside the river, waving the stick dreamily.
ReplyDeletelots of love.
trisha
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yes you are absolutely correct...had to break a branch for stability but it served its purpose well...enjoy my Dearest Golden Lotus of God's Love(+)
ReplyDeletesoulbro*:)xo---{--@
hope you relished every second of it.
ReplyDeletelots of love
trisha
Yes, I loved every minute being in peace and solitude with a great one...enjoy my dearest Golden Lotus of God's Love(+)
ReplyDeletesoulbro*:)xo ---{--@
Dom HI....this is a beautiful solitude poem here of the Journey of your trip here. As I feel it with you on this one. Thanks for sharing it as it give me comfort reading this myself. Love and hugs, Elisabeth xoxo
ReplyDeleteHey WLF~SMILINGS~have not seen you here in awhile...I sent you an email about what this post is truly about...I conquered a mountain by myself with obstacles on an incline of 60 degrees for 1.7 miles...the real test was coming back as it was getting dark but negotiating the rocks and boulders I had climbed proved a little decisive coming back...felt a little twinge in my knees for the past 3 days but it is gone Now...enjoy as well(+)
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