Romance on a gray afternoon*
Today has such a gray afternoon
But I am in the mood to be a swoon
Your heart is burning a hole in mine
I feel our passions, becoming entwined
So what, let it rain all day
With romance together, this is Love our way
Dom*Colucci 2011
Dear Dom: Sensing fun and frivolity in this poem, all made light by love even on the grayist day! "This is love our way" And a great way too! Lovely style!
ReplyDeleteI Love playful Love as well....I see these scenarios stem out in my Awareness in romantic interludes....enjoy as well my Love(+)
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~Oh, this one, I like it! :))
ReplyDelete~Let it rain all day, let it rain all night
as long as we are entwined inside~
~Rain may be outside tonight
but sunshine in our lives, heart to heart~
Im writing poetry! :)) Life is good!
Soul~fully Loving You~~ xoxoxo My Dearest Dom
I like what you wrote..maybe you will set up your own blogsite and start writing poetry and the next thing you know I will be buying your book as well....enjoy my Love..Love You always(+)
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:)) no, I don't think so... i was just following on your poem and my little poem was just that yours inspired me to go on ~ Your poem is light, like the happy dance of rain drops falling on the ground, that make the heart sing and dance~~so the prose kept on flowing~~~Love you Always xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteno matter what you are still beautiful and inspiring as well in all that you become creative with...Love You always as well...enjoy your evening(+)
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You may release it as a comment or not, it is up to you, but you inspired me to do something I started thinking of recently: to publish my poetic replies to your poems. I am now in the process of gathering them and will start putting them in a frame next.
ReplyDeleteOK...sounds good to me as I am glad I am an inspiration to you but you have always been one to me by making these books happen....enjoy my love(+)
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